Critique on our title sequence

Our audience wanted to watch our film from watching the opening title sequence however thy believed it gave to much away and could guess the story line although saying that they could not guess the whole film. They also felt that the subliminal shots in the montage were good however some of the shots need tidying although they are good. They also said that there needed to be more sound effects in the title sequence and that the emerging title of traces needs to be made longer and needs a sound effect that is scary and shocks you. Daniel pye our actor needs to be more terrified in one of the shots so we are going to reshoot it. we need to bring music in when Daniel the audience said. The audience said it is clear thet the film is a well thought about project as the mis_en_scene is brilliant as well as the shots and performance of our actors. The final comment by the audience is that we need to tidy and refine shots and dd certain things like the music and the new shot of pye.